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Only the empty glass sat there now,
the rim lined with grains of salt.
How long has the windowsill been so empty?
No more strands of hair linger
on the desk where papers were scattered,
the moon illuminating them in a silver glow.

When will the moon go down?
When will the glass be put away?
When will the desk have someone there?
When will the salt be brushed from the rim?
When will someone lay their head down, hair
spreading on the dusty windowsill?

Birds no longer rest on the windowsill.
So abandoned, the moon trying to shy away,
longing for a hair to soak its rays in.
The foggy glass outside cracks down the middle,
salt from the ocean swept away in a light breeze.
Won’t that harm the desk?

Soon they will come to take the desk away,
prying it from the already lonely windowsill.
Because it can’t cry, will salt simply pour from the drawers?
Will the harsh moon laugh at its expense,
when someone peers through the glass to see it’s gone,
their hair clutching their shoulders in fear?

Not even that woman with tumbling ebony hair
can save the desk from its impending doom.
“Wait!” she cries, hands leaving stains on the glass
while she tries to climb in through the windowsill.
Staring on, the moon knows of her sorrows,
hydrated salt trickling down her cheeks.

Salty is how the blood tastes,
the woman notes while running a hand through her hair,
reflecting in her eyes the moon.
The desk will be destroyed now,
no longer waiting peacefully by the windowsill,
not able to look beyond the glass.

A heart made of glass and salt,
her hair touches the windowsill while she sits upon it,
knowing the desk and its secrets belong only to the moon.
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Author's Comments

While in my creative writing class, my teacher gave us a packet of different poetry styles to try. This one is called the Sestina, where you pick six words and incorporate them into different lines and patterns. I liked how this one turned out.

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:iconsheikz2:
Whoa, was that even ON the school server? Snap, son, another masterpiece.

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Lee: "I'll fight for your honor and your hymen"
Monica: LOOOOLLLL
Lee: XDDDDDDDD
Monica: I don't really get why everyone likes the first one better, I like to think they got better...
Monica: *sigh* Makes me feel like a failure. :/
:iconmonica-jaganshi:
XD I don't remember which ones I sent and which ones I didn't. I'm glad you enjoyed it though~

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Monica: Hmm...get robbed? Check. Have someone steal the car? Check. Run out of money for food? Check. Leave my ID somewhere? Check!

Leena: Don't forget rape.

Monica: Yeah, good point-HEY! I did not get RAPED!

Leena: XD
:iconsheikz2:
:D Yeah, great way to mesh such different words :D

*****

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Lee: "I'll fight for your honor and your hymen"
Monica: LOOOOLLLL
Lee: XDDDDDDDD
Monica: I don't really get why everyone likes the first one better, I like to think they got better...
Monica: *sigh* Makes me feel like a failure. :/
:iconmonica-jaganshi:
Trust me, it was difficult to make this without being repetitive. o.o

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Monica: Hmm...get robbed? Check. Have someone steal the car? Check. Run out of money for food? Check. Leave my ID somewhere? Check!

Leena: Don't forget rape.

Monica: Yeah, good point-HEY! I did not get RAPED!

Leena: XD
:iconsheikz2:
I see, but you did well :D

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Lee: "I'll fight for your honor and your hymen"
Monica: LOOOOLLLL
Lee: XDDDDDDDD
Monica: I don't really get why everyone likes the first one better, I like to think they got better...
Monica: *sigh* Makes me feel like a failure. :/
:iconmonica-jaganshi:
Sankyuu~

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Monica: Hmm...get robbed? Check. Have someone steal the car? Check. Run out of money for food? Check. Leave my ID somewhere? Check!

Leena: Don't forget rape.

Monica: Yeah, good point-HEY! I did not get RAPED!

Leena: XD
:iconspartindragon208:
YAY! I loved it. It is so intense.

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Fuggedaboutit!!!!
:iconmonica-jaganshi:
Huzzah~ Chank you very much!

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-Speaking about Duc d' Anjou from Elizabeth-

Leena: It turns out he's a crossdresser. I mean, if you have a pornstache, you just don't wear a dress.

Me: He had a PORNSTACHE?!
:iconspartindragon208:
No problem!

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Fuggedaboutit!!!!

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